“……固然彭伯里因为添了如许一名妇女,并且妇女在城里的两位母舅母都到这儿来过,是以使流派遭到了玷辱,但她白叟家还是屈尊到彭伯里来拜候。”
“但是,你为甚么偏要逼我,以为我没有把至心话全说出来呢?”
“……固然彭伯利添了如许一名妇女,并且妇女在城里的母舅母也多次来访,导致这里的树林遭到了玷辱,但凯瑟琳夫人还是屈尊来看望这佳耦俩。”
总之,在详细的翻译实际中,我根基上遵守的是一条尽能够地保存原文的用词特性和原词句式的翻译原则。我以为,因为我的翻译原则和王、孙二位先生的有所分歧,因此我的译本在团体风采上仿佛与他们的是不太一样的。当然他们的译本也各有所长,王科一先生的译本逼真而细致,孙致礼先生的译文浅显而上口,不过在细致上,仿佛是王先生的略胜一筹。从底子上说,王、孙二位先生差未几遵守的是同一条翻译原则,因此从团体风采上看,他们的译本有类似之处。
孙致礼先生的译文:
5.But at length, by Etizabeth′s persuasion, he was prevailed on to overlook the offence, and seek a reconciliation; after a little farther resistanse on the part of his aunt, her resentment gave away, either to her affection for him, or her curiosity to see how his wife conducted herself;and she comdescended to wait on them at pemberley, in spite of that pollution which its woods had received, not merely from the presence of such a mistress, but the visits of her uncle and aunt from the city.
我的译文: